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MORNING WINGS (by jrqc - poem, imagery and symbolism)



I remember the time I would spread my wings wide,

I remember the sun warming and caressing my face, no need to hide

just as I was soaring to the skies, I sensed you near, I let myself go as I abandoned all fear.


One day, I jumped up high, I let my wings open in the last minute,

one day, I felt free and light, as my own soul held me by the hands,

as we circled the skies in a frenzy dance.

in a crazy spin, just feeling the joy within.


You remind me of freedom, of a young soul,

in the vast skies eager to soar,

let us fly away,

play in a field of dreams,

covered in rainbow streams.


Let us spread our wings and transcend the skies,

transcending day and night our spirits rise,

just as we abandon the flesh cage,

we return to the place where we belong,

we are anew, nothing is wrong.


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